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love's flow

Freeze not my hopes and desires
let them bloom with all the sheen in fair weathers

Winter many a time we have seen
and to majority,  it is a rosy bed for pleasures
cap it not with undue  deposits of snow
bristle it with all the cordial love's  unending flow

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  • Rhythm Child
    November 20, 2008

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    great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 19, 2008
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    beautiful ending...I love the imagery in this piece
    good luck