Emotionless?.. too much emotion?
I don't know.
Everything I'm feeling.. can not be expressed.
Pain, frustration.. anger, hostility.. lonelyness, mind distraught.. just blah.
I hold a life in the palm of my hands..deep throughout my heart, but still feel empty.
How could this be? Why do I feel so alone?
No one to share the facial expressions of my child.. no one to see the true beauty..
Everyday passes.
I try to embrace the best but still feel the worst..
My life seems like it will be this way forever.
Forever feeling alone.. forever feeling tired of living..
but having to live for the life of my child.
Emotionless? No. too much emotion? Maybe too much too handle...
I don't know..
Author notes
Just writing how I feel at the moment..
Written February 3rd, 2004
A contest entry
- Slipping by someoneweknew.
300 points, ended April 17, 2004, 40 entries
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this was soooooo terrific, it flowed very nicely and was very easy to read. i read it twice it was so good. very very good write
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good
Some days suck, others are nice, all for what point? The highlight of the poem was the paradox of emotion, a nice touch i must say. not a bad piece. -
I know how you feel somedays just don't make sense and then there are people that try to help you understand them then make you more confused than you were before. I don't know maybe it is cause i am a blonde. What can i say. lol Great poem!!
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