I wish i was not foolish
but, I am.
I should be optimistic
but, i am not in the mood.
You may want to laugh at me
but, you won't.
You may start to cry
but, I wont let you.
"You may say I am a dreamer
but I am not the only one"
Author notes
I cant take credit for the words in quotes- they were and always will be John Lennon's
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I LOVE THE ENDING LINE.
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yep you are foolish. ONE TICK.
second stanza. half a tick... dont have to be optomistic
I do want to laugh at you... so thats wrong
I might cry so give ya half a tick
last verse 2 ticks
Im afraid you have failed the exam. Pass Mark 80% your mark 56%
haha well i had fun with this poem comment... Love the poem, ignore the stuff above, im in a crazy mood KIWI BIRD
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I won't even ask!
somehow this reminds me of a show called "House" its about this doctor who is perpetually high on pain meds...i think vicoden
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ive seen house...
i will have to check the tablets that I am taking
JOKE lol
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oh go to sleep already....no more vicoden for you Master-G
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I think that you are both strange and refuse to associate with either of you.
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oh stop being so dramatic, you have always known i am strange...that is why you are my best friend...plus for the record you are strange too. you will see me tomarrow and you cant just shun me!
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Oh really? Watch me!
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well you talking to me right now! *tounge*
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tounge?
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well, the second one looks a bit like you
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you know I am right!
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jee thanks... it protrays your mood swings better that mine though
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Hey, just because I have mood swings doesn't mean that I look like that. Speaking of mood swings, I'm seeing Jman tomorrow.
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not nessicerally(wow bad spelling lol)
adn stop sending the notes twice!
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HA! like the ending, good structure, and i know exactly how you feel
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