You weaved your Sacred threads of DNA as my body formed in my mothers womb
The colours of the cosmic energies flowing through my veins
All the colours my body encompass
Opening to recieve the Divine ray of life like the petals of the Lotus flower
Sparkling cosmic rainbows dancing to the symphony of the stars
He weaves me of colours bright and delicate
He takes His time pondering His creation upon the Sacred Loom
He decorates with eyes that sparkle
Voice that echoes the prayers of the ages
Solar systems He created out of need
Me He created to show his creative need for colour and joy.
Author notes
I loved the prompt. Colourful Thread..
A contest entry
- the colorful thread ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Leads to the imagination and congrats on the trophy! Blessings


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A lovely and thoughtful piece, well done. Congratulations,
~Mary O

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So true and so deep thought you portrayed..I love it..the immagery is quite strong and visual as well..thanks for sharing ...well done...
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this is full of beautiful imagery and rhythms,we are all unique creations some people are lotus flowers others are prickly thorns.your poem is a feast of colour and sound.


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Beautiful
Yes within each creation is perfection for us to hold true and continue the love

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Great poem
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