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Perspectives (It's a little long, and well, as boring as usual, so...)




Autumn Moon

They speak your name in well-worn praise
  and wonder that you do not swoon
as if your grace were plain enough
to be sung to a common tune.

If I should write in lauding verse
would my poetry be immune
to all the time-worn rhetoric
extolling you, my Autumn moon?




HOTW (Hope Of The World)

Tonight, the moonlight whispers
upon winds of Autumn leaves,
that rustle on these tinseled veils
where hopefulness concedes.

But, tonight the stars awaken
from their autumnal sleep,
and I, and you, and all the world,
their promises we keep.




Conspiracy

Moon, tonight we are allies, you and I
confederates of a self-same plan.
Her eyes no longer worship the night
and it's this we understand!




The Artist


The Autumn moon, I have painted
the color of her hair
above the rooftops on my street
beyond the Oak trees there.

The sky I painted, Arsenic black,
to extenuate frigid air
and to remind with crisp saudade--
she will never see it there.




She Speaks

It is but a wisp of airy moon
from his distant shore to mine
and though he steals into my thoughts
his light no longer shines.

No longer does it guide the path
by which my heart's entwined
but stands more as a relic of
old memories, refined.




Star-crossed Sky

My last poem I meant to speak
beneath the transcendence of the moon
so you would know a radiance
that no one could impugn.

So when another whispered in your ear,
beneath a star-lit sky
a part of you would remember me...
and would never let me die.

For I did not want the simple things
that others held so dear
I wanted nothing tangible
words only we would hear.

I could not face beneath the light,
the dearth of passion in your eyes
nor the words upon your breath
--their honesty disguised.

And so my poem, I never wrote
and it's vain of me to find,
that somehow you have read these words
and know that they are mine.




All photographs are used by permission of the photographer MariGóes and are under copyright to Mariza G. Góes.


The poem itself is under the Creativecommons license and may be used under those terms (excluding the photographs.)

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  • catz Moderators member
    December 28, 2008

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    This all beautiful, Yem and the pictures are great The whole thing is awesome and it would be hard to pick a favorite... but if push came to shove, I think I tend to favor the last one, Star-crossed Sky.

    This has got to go into my bookmarks

    Dee


    • Yemassee gold member
      December 28, 2008
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      Ah thanks for stopping by tonight. I appreciate it.


  • Peteskid gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    I agree these photos are wonderful poetic inspiration, and the poetry is ...in a word... excellent...PK


  • Sandal
    November 22, 2008

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    My perspective is to read endings here, and sadness, and the moon as a frequent reminder of what no longer is. The verse is remarkable for nostalgia and beautiful form. HM is a pretty trophy.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    It's funny to read when you say 'that somehow you have read these words and know that they are mine', for I knew it was you the author of this poem as soon as I started reading it
    I can't pick my favourite part, they are all very good, as a whole poem or standing alone. I guess you never thought to write so much about the moon before you have met me lol
    Those poems are wonderful, and really a great gift to everyone who sees the moon as source of beauty.
    Thanks for honouring my favourite celestial body

    • Mari Goes gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      Oh please not made of brie
      that would spoil the moon for me.
      The moon has such a beauty
      no way it can stink
      Rather to think she's made of cream
      white and soft like a wonderful dream


      • Yemassee gold member
        November 22, 2008
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        your poem is better than mine

        A rain of tears!

    • Yemassee gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      No kidding you knew it was me, who else would still have your three year old moon photos?

      Kind words, thank you.

      Now one more:

      If it is as they say
      the moon is made of cheese, "Geee!"
      pass the crackers, will you please,
      the moon is made of Brie!

      • Yemassee gold member
        December 6, 2008
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        Why, for ten bucks, I'd shove you down a well (but only after lighting you afire of course) and be done with you once and for all!

        I wish I had some cheese right now.

        • Yemassee gold member
          December 6, 2008
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          Cheese? Did you mention cheese? I like all kinds. Monterey Jack...Swiss, Provolone...Cheddar, American...Velveeta, Cheeze Whiz...bologna...no wait that isn't cheese....


  • MargaretG
    November 20, 2008

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    "that the autumn leaves were turning to the colour of her hair" is a sad line from Windmills of Your Mind by Dusty Springfield, and your line about the Artist reminded me.
    This is a fine and poignant collection, it deserves consideration for a trophy.


  • bozoloper
    November 20, 2008

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    i really liked your last stanza, i guess it's a poem on its own. you've found something there, i'm not going to comment as to meanings, who could begin to assume? just going to go poke at some of my pieces, and wonder why i can't get them into such nicely formed meter.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    the moon
    the dark of night
    the words you write
    all allies

    but the moon
    in the dark of night
    shines a light
    and exposes you

    exposes the poet
    of depth of thought
    the poet who ought
    to know of his brilliance

    the poet who doth
    protest too much
    that his words and such
    are long and boring

    but in reality
    the words are heartfelt and soaring

    ___________________________



    The sum of the whole,
    a remarkable compostion!

    M-C


    • Yemassee gold member
      November 20, 2008
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      That bubbin' giraffe thanks you.


      • Aesthete2000 gold member
        November 20, 2008
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        If he stops chewing long enough to speak!!!


        • Sir Ima Cucumber
          November 20, 2008

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          He talks with his mouth full...kind of like me. Actually eating is sacred yo me. It's hard to get into my noggin when I am eating. Ever watch Seinfeld? The Joe Dimaggio/dinky donuts episode...Kramer would bang on the table but Dimaggio was focused on the donut and his coffee which Kramer used to explain why Dimaggio was such a good hitter...it was funnier than it reads here.

          Good morning, how are you? Doing more painting?

          • Aesthete2000 gold member
            November 20, 2008
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            Think I saw a part of that one.
            The one ingrained im my mind is the "Soup Nazi,"
            Seinfeld being turned away...

            Wanting Winter to be over, and it's still Autumn!
            Brrr---no fun talking to the moon when shivering!
            Painting soon, special order for football coaches
            wives. the hard part is the"X" for Xavier to paint
            perfectly!!

            Working outside, or lucky to be framed in???


  • gaze
    November 19, 2008

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    Those poems are simply beautiful!
    To each moon a special verse. They say the moon radiates a cold light, just a reflection of the sun, but she still looks so warm, and that warmth you've captured with your words.


    • Yemassee gold member
      November 20, 2008
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      It's the photos. Do I know how to cheat or what!

      It's not a judging entry of course.

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