Will you sing a song of love, so my deaf heart may hear again?
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mysticstorm
A contest entry
- 1/3 Round Contest by Never.Give.Up.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is by far the best one line I have ever read in any poem let alone a poem of it's own, please tell me this didn't skip a trophy! Outstanding sweet one. Best to you
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This is beautiful, so heartfelt and loving.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Kate
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Beautiful
WOW I just loved this one. What a fabulous one liner. IThe message is so beautiful!!!
so my deaf heart may hear again?
PERFECT, Best wishes in the contest. Love It!!
Blessings
Much Love
Your Sis
Kelle Marie
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Beautiful line sweetheart. Don't wince when you hear me sing, LOL. Perhaps the heart shall hear again. Best to you.
Love
Sun and stars shine no brighter than you.
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Wow...
Such a powerful and insightful statement in one sentence. I am powerfully impressed. Fantastic. ~mandie~ -
it was really beautiful...very deep...
loved it good luck!!
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Your words are so beautiful and soothing. It reminds me of my husband before we married. Good luck in the contest darling.
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Beautiful
Let your soulshine! Shine till the break of Day! Beautiful write hun
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ove it Sis
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That's some line sis! Magic!! A song many of us would love to hear after our heart's have been closed off
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Perhaps only the angels can sing such a beautiful song to touch the heart's depth. Nice Work.
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my deaf heart < a great choice of words
this was so short yet i think this is where it held its power
a great write
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