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Myths intercept Me

myths intercept me
between thought and word
i am devoted
to the yearning of iris
and the compromise
of clivia

my pain is not carried
by the wester
or inflicted by the sun
nor am i rainbow
or sunflower
longing for zephir
or apollo

my melancholy roots
in the drumbeat of my blood

a nameless loss

myra

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Written March 5th, 2002

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  • myrataal silver member
    March 15, 2002
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    Thank you again, Bonnie ...


  • bonnie blue
    March 15, 2002
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    how perfect! my god. amazing. i am humbled.

  • myrataal silver member
    March 6, 2002
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    Thank you again, Mike, for reading my work. I am honoured by your visits.

  • Michael Dennis Rivers
    March 5, 2002
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    Beautiful myra classical and expressive
    'my melancholy roots
    in the drumbeat of my blood' so beautiful.
    Thank you for sharing it.
    Mike