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Dark and light

Dark and light

I must show you my world.
A world were my mind wins battles.
I can not come to reality.
For I am stuck in between.
For the light within shines of color,
And the darkness of black and gray.
I ‘m lost, never to find the right path.
As I stand here, I stand empty.
Not knowing witch way to go.
If only I could see a path.
Thin maybe I’ll find my way out.
But I'm afraid, stuck in this circle.
In my insanity, never reality.  

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"Insdie everyone is light and darkness, good and evil, right and wrong. Sometimes the light is showing from you..but sometimes its the dark...but don't let them both out at the same time..for that is chaos..and thats when someone can truly go insane"

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  • InsaneJoe
    November 20, 2008

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    Wondeful!

    awesome! you followed and interpreted the quote...the only thing is that you really didnt have rhyme...but ill let u slide...good luck in the contest!


    • eternalsol
      November 20, 2008
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      thanx sorry i did not relize it had to rhime but im glad you liked it good luck with the juging