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I Imagine....

I imagine our hips joining together,
You on top of me,
One inside the other.

And I imagine what it must feel like to have someone penetrate your body,
Your mind,
Your soul.

And I imagine a bubble forming around us,
Our own little amniotic sack,
The two of us together,
The two of us as one.

And I count down the hours until I can speak to you again;
Ten
Nine
Eight - I sleep now
zzzZZZzzz
Two
One - You awake for school in 50 minutes time.

And I imagine what it must feel like to curl up together,
Side by side,
Our delicate love surrounding us.

Feeling numb to everything outside;
You become mine,
I become yours,
Singing, forever our own private lullaby;
"I love you my darling, my mistress, my life."
"I love you my sweetheart, my pest, my strife."

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And you got rid of me? Your darling, your mistress, your life

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  • The Jigsaw Poet
    November 20, 2008

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    I have already said what I think of this poem

    I really do like it, it is so passionate without being sordid, and the whole poem carries such a sweet nature

    Obviously a bit bittersweet for you but nonetheless another great write


  • Galaxy2
    November 19, 2008

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    'I imagine our hips joining together
    You on top of me
    One inside the other'
    ...wow... a great start!
    and splendid end!
    Kisses all over honey!
    Gal