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World in a Dream

The comfort of sleep
The call of my dreams
Where all as you know it
Is not as it seems

I need no one to comfort me,
just leave me with my insanity.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 16

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    Wow..i love the intensity of the emotions..very painful move of the heart ..thanks for sharing such a strong piece..well done..


  • Insane-Joe
    November 20, 2008

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    good poem

    Great poem...good rhyme sheme...however u didnt really focus on the quote i gave u...good write though. Good luck!


  • Rhythm Child
    November 19, 2008

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    this poem had great effect, it flowed well and was something that i enjoyed reading
    a great write from a great poet


  • Silvos. silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    LOVE IT! This flows together amazingly, and the topic is just great. I definitely enjoyed reading this, and am glad I stumbled upon this piece. Great luck to you in the contest you enetered!

    Silvos.