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Her Absent Love

When she is all alone
Her lover abscent
The sweet lady spends her time in quiet contemplation
Of the yearning and longing for her lover to return.
She walks the lonely forests deep with butterflies as her only comfort
Her face akin to the Full Moon on a dark night
Magical energies dance in her pressence
How wonderful the pressence of you who embody the nymphs of heaven
In your mortal shell.
She walks the night in silence as
the Owl of the Goddess flies silently overhead
Sacred charms blest by her silent breath the one reminder that her lover will
return
One day
To Avalon.




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  • Passionate Phoenix
    November 20, 2008

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    wow this is lovely. I love these lines...
    "How wonderful the pressence of you who embody the nymphs of heaven, In your mortal shell."
    Beautiful imagery and wonderful use of 'older' styled language. Description is perfe3ction. well done and good luck! xx

  • sand
    November 19, 2008
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    moderate

  • sand
    November 19, 2008

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    then he returned riding on a wild black horse
    but her face ,wrinkled with dust and mist
    those hours of parting turned remnent
    but what still remained was love ...


  • Rhythm Child
    November 19, 2008

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    beautiful
    this poem had great effect, it flowed well and was something that i enjoyed reading
    a great write from a great poet