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Bloom

Petal for petal, hearts burst into bloom
The seed of our passion, the seed of our doom.

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But never before has doom been so appealing

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  • DevinCora
    March 13

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    Once again a short and sweet flower poem! I think I will sit down and write my own when I get the chance... but I don't know if it could compare...


  • Beauty Of Silence
    December 11, 2008

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    awww hahas this is pretty beautiful, with a rather um.. "explosive" ending. i liked this though... it holds a great meaning... you've expressed this feeling very well in such little words keep penning


  • WindLeaf
    November 20, 2008
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    Indeed. This type of doom is indubitably appealing... I have experienced it myself. *sigh