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it's too soon.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Stay away from me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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4 words

A contest entry

Now you tell me:

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    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
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  • parachute fog
    December 9, 2008
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    easy gold, although a phrase you have used often concerning me, it still suprised me somewhat.


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    November 20, 2008
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    Oooo nice, congrats on the gold love.


  • hks
    November 19, 2008
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    :[


  • HaleyMary
    November 19, 2008

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    Wow, wasn't expecting such a short write, but this says a lot. It's like if love comes along too soon in life, people may want some time to themselves to think things through. Thanks for sharing and congrats on the trophy.


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Congrats on that gold...I couldn't have said it better myself!!!


  • untitled.
    November 19, 2008

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    Ah, you stealer of breath, you... Funny how much 4 little words can kill. Your walls are endless. Someone will find a crack, and seep through your heart. We are flawed creatures, and are meant to break.

    Exquisite. Congrats on the gold.

    ~S.


  • Death of the Author
    November 19, 2008

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    THIS is a gold winning poem?!

    OK, I'm gonna start ranting about ridiculous short contests again.

    Takes the effin biscuit.

    To applaud or not to applaud ~~

    Eurgh...cos it's you ~~


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    WOW...what 4 powerful words you have used.
    Great job and congratulations on the Gold.
    Soulful Woman


  • sailor ptolema
    November 19, 2008
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    oh yes.


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    November 19, 2008

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    This is a great take indeed... So long as you feed me candy, I will stay away


  • daviscth silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    LOL!!! Wonderful take on the 4 word limit!!! I can just picture someone saying this. Good luck.


  • iverbthenoun
    November 19, 2008
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    HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!! sex? love? muah? lust?



    fine!

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