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Before..My Confession..Contest

Before I “bumped” into you - I stalked you.

Before I spoke to you - I wrote down what to say,

Before I kissed you - I practised in the mirror.

Before I said yes, in my mind we were already going out.

Before when I said I liked your music , I actually hated it.

Before I knew you, I spoke about you all the time.

Before this mature girl your with was actually an childish obsessed one.

My honest confession.

Before you read this you probably thought I was normal!

Now there’s no lies!

(feels good)

Author notes

Most poets were writing about angry things, I thought I'd write a little different quirky poem!

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  • SageyBaby
    November 29, 2008
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    Thankyou for my gold, wow! i am so suprised. Many thanks!


  • ratkos
    November 19, 2008

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    i totally love this....i cant even describe why i mean the words wont come this write in its entirety is ...WOW...it just touched me ...as i read it , i was like thats me,thats me, that too. awesome job!!!!!!!