My Magic Swan by Amera at All poetry

My Magic Swan

I’m living in this land of dreams
And nothing here is what it seems
With magic forces all around
My feet no longer touch the ground

I found a wizard with a pen
Who won my heart among all men
With incantations so profound
My feet no longer touch the ground

He keeps me in this land of fey
And sometimes he must go away
I wait for him for we are bound
My feet no longer touch the ground

I’m living in this land of dreams
My feet no longer touch the ground

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Kyrielle Sonnet

Dedicated to my AP hubby; Swan song
Picture prompts b.) Art Work by: aegina

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AutumnGypsy
December 12, 2008

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Oh hun, this is so beautiful. I am left wanting more of this beauty in the end, your forms are out of sight and always flawless. I must start taking lessons from you Best to you
chilali
December 10, 2008

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I really loved your take on the picture and the rhymes were just stunning. I always love good rhyming poetry. Thank you for entering and good luck

Much love
Ylova
Swan song
November 21, 2008

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Oh my! you are nothing less than sweet nectar flowing richly drom the druelplets of a wild raspberry. Nothing short of sensational and i dream of you every mile
artis
November 20, 2008
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best wishes to a long and joyous couplet.
I hope you never truly find your swan song, but instead dance to the song of the swan. Let love take wing, feather light, and soar in vast flutters through two souls, adding two lovely views shared in bliss.~~~Artis
Dalaney
November 20, 2008

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.....um, how come you didn't have a wedding shower? and, ummm, where was i when you two got hitched? what are the perks to having an AP hubby, other than you don't have to do AP dishes or wash AP laundry?

This is a beautiful dedication poem, Amera, but I never expect any less from you when it comes to poetry and heart. Love, Lane
jadeangyal
November 20, 2008
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Very cool poem. The repeating line becomes more meaningful as your poem develops. Nice form!
StarEyes
November 20, 2008

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Sis,

This is fantastic! I love it! What a great sonnet you have here! I am sure you AP hubby loves this as much as I do! Great job!

Best of luck in this contest!

and love

Nyetta
Wandika
November 20, 2008
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Very nice
What a nice tribute to your AP hubby.
A beautiful form.

Jim
second-born
November 20, 2008

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wow....he must truly swept your feet away!!! very lovely piece with an enchanting touch...and the flow is terrific! God bless you and your hubby!
Mairi bheag
November 20, 2008

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Aha! You have a hubby!

What a nice way to celebrate!
Pure Thought
November 19, 2008

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I have not read his words
...but he must write well to have your hand.

Congrats Mrs Saint.
HaleyMary
November 19, 2008

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Beautiful write, Amera. I liked the ending the best. It seemed metaphorical, like the way a person feels swept off their feet when they are in love. Wonderful poetic form, too. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
SummerlandRayne
November 19, 2008

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This is lovely...I am so happy for you and Swan Song. Two wonderful poets...congratulations!

Az
Skybow
November 19, 2008

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There sould be a saying, "That is so Amera"! It would mean what I'm about to say about this poem. It's smoothly magical, flows with rhythm meter and tells a wonderful story flawlessly.

Your wizard must be one heck of a magic man for you to love him so. Best of luck to you both in life and to you in this contest.
Bazza
November 19, 2008
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Head in the clouds too ??
Great take on the picture ... Original clever and a sweet sincere and innocent piece of fun poetry.
Disturbed Prodigy
November 19, 2008

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awww, this is amazing, i like this reminds me of my road to ap series, i think you did a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
Desire
November 19, 2008

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Precious~
Gorgeous Dedication and for one who brings forth much Inspiration to others (like You do)
Woot!! Love the form You penned this in~

Congratulations on Your AP Wedding-
*gift*
He is one cool cat
I almost had to hire someone to read for me because he wrote a bajillion pieces in one day
Love this Beautiful!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
Moonlightdragon
November 19, 2008

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Congratulations on you AP wedding
Lovely poem looking forward to new work
written by you and your husband
What a great matching of gifted poets.
cricketjeff
November 19, 2008

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It is important for all poets to keep Jeffs happy, Jeffs are important, Jeffs matter!!!

This apart, your new husband has been very well honoured in a form at which you excel, this is magical and sweet, ideal for a newly wed couple.

Great Stuff.
Swangrnv
November 19, 2008

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beautiful
and I must admit the title more than captured my interest! l.o.l. great write poetess..
melphleg
November 19, 2008

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Makes me want to be your AP hubby. Beautiful words, my sweet friend. You are a master of the sonnet forms. Appropriate for a love poem.
Rovingone
November 19, 2008

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What a wonderful love poem. It has all the beauty of an ancient sonnet and the simplicity of a child's nursery rhyme, a fairy tale for the heart.
NeonRose
November 19, 2008

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Absolutely yummy! Flows with the ease of a sigh, and blends like the tears in a pool....Great write!