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Theory on Where We Are (Fibonacci)

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...where

time

stands still

and conscience

soaks up that sum dark

it provides, what many conceive

as transcendent, wide berths for all, who close in on it. 

Yet, to convert time, we place our own, where a guide stood,  

that we may defend those theories,

over what we trust,

yet stay

firm by

this. 

While

this

resides

all we need

is, to know how far

can this be measured space and time

and if, as to see ourselves more, we can reflect, now.

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  • TrippinBTM
    May 12

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    nice, i've written a few "fib's" a long time ago, forgot about that as a form. May have to give it a go, thanks for inspiring me.


  • dustytiger
    November 26, 2008

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    i love this, and the way you wrote it's so cool! i just love the "beat" as i read this, it's just so cool, best of luck in the contest


  • Desire gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    Oh My~

    Wowzers there is only one other person who I know of who writes in this form~
    Wonderful piece penned which digs deep into the psyche~ Gives much to think about
    Love the picture which added that extra touch
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 22, 2008

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    This is a profound poem.
    There are many theories and many unanswered questions in this world.
    But one truth is ~ the presence and grace of God.

    It is thought-provoking and well-expressed write.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas