frozen roses
by the pond
frozen roses
in the yard
this beautiful rose of mind
please stay frozen in winter time
i do not want you to wilt away
for that will be a sad sad day
so roses so tender and bold
i see thee here.....
....frozen in time
A contest entry
- WINTER ROSE by Rhythm Child.
550 points, ended December 2, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this is a special poem just for my grand friend Rhthm Child
Comments
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A strong image is used to bring the truth of the love and the truth of the life ..love it..you did a wonderful task here..well done..
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great entry
thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care
message me for anything
Billy (Rhythm Child) -
I really like the ending of this poem .. kinda wraps all of it together.
good luck in the contest
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wow such a beautiful take on the prompt, i like that you wrote this so simply it works so well, and the end is lingering, best of luck in the contest
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