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Honey Sweet

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Since my heart has been
enchanted willingly
by the love of thee
my dreams now live, thrive  
heated essence of you.


I want your tender-touch in
morning, my rogue at night
ravishing the rose to open,
close...at your will.


Down by the briny deep,
loving peace we seek
guided by the tides
ebbing with the moon;
I can't wait to see you soon.


I love thee, as I have never
loved before...with a passion,
a craving; desired beyond stars.


You've taken my soul
on the journey
of raging passion
sweet as honey
within my
dreams

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just real thoughts of love...he's my dream lover

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  • dragonscales
    December 16, 2008

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    good

    it is a nice poem. but something confuses me. in the third stanza the words start rhyming. and then it goes back to freeverse. is there a reason for this? please explain.


    • ennovy silver member
      December 16, 2008
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      This is just a free style or more my own style as a poet.....I wrote it from my heart...just off the top of my head...in a few moments and I liked it...so I posted it.....


  • Heroesrox
    December 13, 2008
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    I think this is excellent. A good job and read! Very sweet and romatic. LOVED IT!

    ~*~*~*~*AWESOME~*~*~*~*~*
    I am so looking forward to reading more of your inspiring work!!!! Great ideas fill your mind, apparently!!!! Thanks for sharing this awesome piece. Hope that the rest of your poems are as awesome as this one was! THANKS SO MUCH!!!!
    ~*~*~*~Heroesrox~*~*~*~*~


  • lovesky
    November 24, 2008
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    Very beautiful and so romantic, great write!


  • Katie Lazette
    November 24, 2008

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    I've returned to read your beautiful poem again. You have used lovely phrases to express your feelings. I especially like the entiore third stanza. Keep up the good writing my friend.


  • Brazos silver member
    November 24, 2008

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    Nothing quite like being in love, is there sweetheart. Your written thoughts remind me of two teenage lovers standing down by the sea, in love for the first time...what a beautiful picture. But one never grows too old to experience that feeling again, does one?

    I love you, Brazos


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 19, 2008
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    Gosh..

    The ap romantics seem to be lighting it up today! wow, a beautiful piece of passion and love..


  • darell
    November 19, 2008

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    Mmmm

    just like campbell's soup this
    piece is Mmm mmm good!
    My my my ennovy, you really
    knocked the ball out the park
    with this one. I felt the love
    and passion streaming down every
    pore. This was a romantic blast
    of real love. Thanks for the
    wonderful journey.
    Sweet as honey!


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    And what wonderful thoughts they are...There a fiery, sweet passion within your words.. Truly a special feeling of love.
    Great job my sister
    Love you
    Nor


  • Katie Lazette
    November 19, 2008
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    Lovely poem novy. Nothing like sweet passion. You have expressed passion very well in your poem.

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