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I WON'T follow you into the dark

it's so dark, so dark everywhere
there's no sound, just emptiness
it's giving me time to think of you
over and over and over again

how much I lost you
everyday I feel lost without you
we both had nothing
but you decided........

to DIE

weeks, months, years passed
but I couldn't stop thinking about you
of course it's hard to get through
and there was always something I could do

I could DIE too

slice my wrists just like you did
and just hope I'll meet you in the skies
but no, my veins won't be slit
and the skies have to wait for a while

cause I know how much you've hurt us all
just by leaving this planet, and the ones you loved
I won't end life just like you did last fall
cause suicide is selfish, even though survival is rough

I know I know, I should be more creative, making own titles, but I just couldn't, and I like that song of DCFC...

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  • Number 13
    November 20, 2008

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    Awe, I know what it's like to lose people to suicide =/
    Sucks, big time, ^_^ and that is a good song


  • L0sT-iN-ThOuGhT
    November 19, 2008

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    Glad you won't end up six feet under before you have to. Love the last line - suicide is selfish, even though survival is rough. But I don't know what to make of it yet....nice write anyway. = )


  • Nothing less
    November 19, 2008
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    very nice, i like it but just because you could survive it doesnt mean it was ever ok