My world came falling down that day
In tears against the building I lay
The one that caused my hurt and pain
The one that choked me with a chain
I had nothing left in me
Through the tears I could not see
My heart was broken, bound, and tied
I felt as though my soul had died
Now looking back I finally see
There are more girls just like me
One’s that think they can’t survive
And so I fight to save their lives…
A contest entry
- Not sure a title! But come anyway! by Lost in a Dreamstar.
448 points, ended November 25, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie by FreeTara.
1600 points, ended November 27, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very good and well written, it suits the prompts but you need to add the prompt number and you name in AN and you can alter it and add things in this if you want that for entering!
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Awesome! i told you that you were really good at poetry! Great job, Megan!
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**woot woot** commenting my own poem..im such a rebel!!!
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Awesome poem
A sense of hope radiates from this
Very good
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Great! but what is the option #?
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Option #3!!!!
Your not alone!!!!!
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