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In the Shadow of your Heart

I call to you,
your name flows smoothly from my lips.
You turn at the sound of my voice.
But you don't see.

~I'm here in the shadows of your heart.~

Your voice rings softly in my ears,
as you call for me.
Still you search as I call your name.

~I'm still here hidden in the shadows of your heart.~

I've been here since the start,
I will forever remain a part of your heart.

~I'm still here hidden in the shadows of your heart.~

I'm a part of you now,
to scared of rejection to
show how I feel.
To afraid of your thoughts
to tell you that
these feelings
are real

Is there anything I may improve on with this poem??

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