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Dreaming Moons

In romance, in suspense
The daunting hero comes to our defense
In nightmare and dreamscapes
Reality is ours, the subconscious rapes

When all comes to an end
And it’s happily ever after
What happens then?
Tranquility or disaster?
Once upon time,
The tale unwinds
And the wicked scheme echoes evil laughter…

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She’s falling through the mirrored reflection of a dream once lost
Something she held so dear, and would keep at any cost
And now in life she finds no comfort in a blood thirsty, cold hearted world
[He has her life]
Poisoned is her sight, the love struck innocence torn away from this girl
[And now take it, this knife]
Up the crooked stairs, down the wasted halls
Into the shadowed room, where she crawls
The hell of purgatory, the bubbling hate
Perplexed scalding scenarios she creates
What if it may
What if it might
Oh God, help me now; my decision tonight

Blood drenched, hollow grave
Only one thing, her life to save
The vacant, pitch black in her eyes
With the dead she wants to lie

Long, mournful years in wait
The time has come, she won’t hesitate

Blade to the vein

Now feel the pain

If he comes
This wretched curse undone

Red, it trickles

The hole itches, burns, and tickles

From red to blue

Stains and puddles on the bed

The world fuzzy, a static blur

Nauseated, sick, unsure

Her world tips, topples, and spins
Oh God, forgive, this sin
Consuming fire and flames
Losing it all with none to blame
And now the light fades
No, not this, my destiny made
The world around me to disappear
Is it? Yes, he has appeared
My heart surges, is it too late?
I feel demons claws, pulling me closer to Hell’s gate
Everything slow, all life before my eyes
My spirit begins to seep with raspy sighs
He reaches me, it’s hit or miss
Leaning over, he plants a kiss

Blackness
Silence
Cold


A streak of gold, a streak of silver, a streak of pure light
Like the stars that fall from the sky at night
My eyes open, the glowing star bright sky
I turn and see you, your shining image, and those starlit eyes
The circle is now complete
[I am complete]
As the love lifts us off our feet
[Forgiveness, making all sins delete]
In my eyes, tears of joy
Enlightening magic I see in this boy
We are one, for ever and ever more
Watch us angels as we soar

Never to forget or lose my way
This is for you, my love
My Black Monday

Author notes

The 'original' fifth and final piece to the Black Monday series. Again this is told from the female point of view and strangely enough, it quite nearly mirrors the rewritten finale in concept and plot. Probably subconsciously did that.

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  • heartbrokenmoon
    January 7
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    that was so beutiful kepit up i wsh i could write such deep peoms as you do i love them...


  • Samantha-x
    January 1

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    Uh, that was incredible. Such beautiful words. It dragged me in, and I actually found myself holding my breath until it was over. You're a brilliant writer.


  • patchgirl
    December 8, 2008
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    WOW...
    Honestly I don't know what to say to this....