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Erotic Ocean

 

 

I love the taste of your exotic oyster between your legs,

as I swim freely through the waves of your erotic ocean.

Release the gates and flood me with your sweetness,

make me surrender to your passionate ways.

 

I love to feel the heat from your body as we make love,

like two comets we collide continuously throughout the night.

As I hold your breasts in my hands and suckle them,

I watch as your emerald eyes get lost in the back of your head.

 

Your ass is so firm yet soft in all the right places,

I pick you up and place you gently on my hardened cock.

I feel you slip and slide all over my shaft,

reaching down you take hold of my balls and start to squeeze.

 

I feel myself starting to come as you look into my eyes,

you ease up and start to slowly pump me once more.

I feel the tension start to subside as we share a passionate kiss.

I reach around and stick two fingers up your lovely ass.

 

You sigh uncontrollably as your body arches back,

pushing me deeper inside of your lovely mound.

I feel your juices as they begin to flow,

flooding my manhood over and over again.

 

I feel that burning sensation once more,

and explode deep inside of your wet oyster.

I take a moment to look into your beautiful eyes,

as I drift away on another wave on your erotic ocean. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Vars
    December 2, 2008

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    i had my friend kate read this one
    and she loved it...a little too much.
    i love it.

    its so...sexy!
    agh!

    i love it i love it i love it!
    this is sooo going to place.
    ahhh!

    GREAT. WRITE!
    xD


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 19, 2008

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    With this i need a long cold shower that will take up a good hour or so, maybe even longer, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Dragonbabyx3
    November 19, 2008

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    Nicely done But honestly, I dont like the idea of an oyster being the primary target here But thats just me. LOL I dont think any woman wants her "Down there" parts to belong to any seafood group LMAO. But I like the idea


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    slowly picks jaw up off of the floor.. WOW!! this one very very HOT Erotic write that you've written my dear brother.. this poem is fabulous and you just managed to steam up my monitor...

    Excellent !!


    kat


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 19, 2008
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    Damn, ya fiqure you write the jumpies in the comment box, you would not forget them, but low and behold, I did, Sorry, and here ya go bro.

  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    You Go Bro With Your Bad Self!

    this poem! Three Jumpies Indeed! Bravo!

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