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Strength In Wind's Sway

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Strength In Wind’s Sway

 

I live in a world with a tilted view,

crafted where corners were slightly slanted

Meek, yet not weak, I’m with those chosen few,

poet’s of society left stranded.

 

I grew up in a place called everywhere,

I’m versatile in thoughts I conceive

Though some live in dark crevices of fear,

I’ve found out many don’t live as they weave.

 

Propelled in motion from descriptive eyes,

never on the side lines of let it be

Ripple effects weep through indigo skies,

entwined with shadowy storms from the sea.

 

Minstrels drink ink without an inkling wrong,

so show compassion towards those without song.

Author notes

Option 8 Inspired.

 

http://mrcool256.deviantart.com/art/The-Last-House-on-the-Left-102441879

 

Thanks for reading my sonnet, much love and light! - poeticweaver

 

http://allpoetry.com/poeticweaver

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  • Stardust-luvr
    February 1, 2009

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    my dearest I don't know how I had missed this masterpiece but i am in awe struck WOW!! yes it brought me to tears i know your pure and compassionate heart and spirit and the inspirations you spill from your ink. loving you always xxxx well done and many blessings always xxxxxx


  • StarEyes
    February 1, 2009

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    This is fantastic! I love this read, and you make some great points in this ! I love it! Great job!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • Topnotchsy
    January 29, 2009

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    Great write. I can definitely see why this poem is so popular. Love the picture as well, and how it really complements the poem.


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    January 29, 2009

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    Mine favorite Stanza
    "
    Propelled in motion from descriptive eyes,

    never on the side lines of let it be

    Ripple effects weep through indigo skies,

    entwined with shadowy storms from the sea."

    tell me how you got that Idea, you are amazing , Im really impressed with this work
    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • couldbeworse
    January 29, 2009

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    loved this:
    I grew up in a place called everywhere,

    I’m versatile in thoughts I conceive

    Though some live in dark crevices of fear,

    I’ve found out many don’t live as they weave.

    youve managed such unforced rhyme and a brilliant piece of art. loved it!


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    January 29, 2009
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    Love it! Wonderful sonnet!


  • Denerica
    January 6, 2009

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    Bravo!

    It is just, so good...loved the line I've found out many do not live as they weave...really all of it flowed and gave a wonderful message to the pic you picked. Blessings


  • penman gold member
    January 5, 2009
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    Excellent

    So very well done. A great creation. Thank you for sharing.


  • Trupoet
    December 16, 2008

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    You write so beautifuly Tim always with a wave of wonderful words.

    i love you very much

    Elena


  • Desire gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    Oh My~

    Now this is another Beauty of a verse my Friend
    Love how You took the picture and gave it a voice~
    Powerful images through Your Sonnet~
    You make it seem so easy
    Bravo!!!
    The physical image is stunning like this write
    also Love the font
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~



  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 26, 2008

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    this kind of opens the mind as you read it, gives you something to think on as well to image, creative, keep it flowing


  • Aimee Hill
    November 25, 2008

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    As with all your writes.... this one too, is so beautifully penned!! Sorry it took me a while to get to this one, but I do think it was worth the wait. I always enjoy reading what you've written.




  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    November 24, 2008

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    wow Bro this is amazing, gotta love the power of sonnets, you and zach really have mastered them! this is amazing, I really enjoyed your word play too, with the rhyme! great work! all my love
    ~ kitty xxx Love ya bro.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Lovely as always!
    Beautiful flow in words of love and compassion...strong wonderful closing of truth and a reminder to what life is about...Love...
    Thank you for sharing your heart with us, dear poet.
    Love,


  • Jalalbad gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    this should have won gold poetic heart...


  • Lonely
    November 20, 2008

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    What a lovely poem.. beautiful use of words.. The images you draw.. And it goes along so well with the picture.. You are really into writing totally wonderful stuff now a days.. You're poetry just keeps getting better and better everytime I read.. I mean, everytime I read i think thats the extreme beauty one can put in a poem, and the next poem is even more beautiful. Wow. you're a great poet and a great person.

    Peace and Love
    Lonely


  • Introvert2006
    November 20, 2008

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    Amazing!

    How you take a photograph, and give it it's own meaning through your poetic talent. Nice job to say the least. Congrates on a fine masterpiece of a write! All the best!

    Introvert2006


  • poetryrocksmysox
    November 20, 2008

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    Excellent!

    You amaze me with your use of verbage, your descriptive view, and your out of the box imagery using a picture prompt! This is what makes this piece special to me, is to see your brilliant weavings in action. You can pen on anything it so seems, and this is just another piece you show your poetic skills. Nice sonnet, love the way it flows, as all your works just roll off the tongue so perfectly. I adore you, and love your works!

    K.

  • Rootless
    November 20, 2008

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    I like this poem, it has a nice flow to it and a nice amount of metaphor without becoming too metaphorical and all around confusing (like all too many of my writes). Good job with this and good luck in the future


  • LunaLacrim
    November 20, 2008

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    hmm

    thats quite an intresting poem it's just like the picture and i like how you are inspired like that thats something i can't do quite yet good job!

    ~LunaLacrim†


  • Wandika gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Interesting poem

    with some trueisms within. I particularly liked the line"I’ve found out many don’t live as they weave." This is so true but seldom seen because of the media we use.

    Jim


  • iamshirookami
    November 19, 2008
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    Very very awesome ^^


  • Stingersinger53
    November 19, 2008

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    Perfect take on the picture. Wonderful words that are so true. Good luck to you in the contest!!
    Hugs!!!
    Cayla


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    A very deep piece. Enjoyed this one.
    Maybe cause I can relate. well done
    and of course best wishes in the contest,
    but honestly this is a winner in my eyes.


    love you always

    Passionspromise


  • WordsAndWits
    November 19, 2008
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    I love the picture! The imagery is fantastic, and it relates to my life a bit. Great write!


  • fairywings09
    November 19, 2008

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    ooo! i really like the view and pictures that i can imagine in my head!! That is really cool! An interesting way how u set things in this here writing of yours. Very awesome!! ^_

  • TrippinBTM
    November 19, 2008

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    a very effective sonnet. I liked the ending, and the rhymes were well done


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    Minstrels drink without an inkling wrong, show compassion for those without song. Ver nice last lines that really sum up your poem so well. Very creatively done to incorp the pic! ~Sie

  • Whispering Wind gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    AWESOME

    your words flow like magic my pet and there is great wisdom weaved within them...so often people are just not what they seem to be and from a heart that is lost a kind hand should be extended...outstanding and a pleasure to read


  • theroseofbattle
    November 19, 2008

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    awesome. youtook the photograph and turned into a vision all your own. wonderful rhyme and rhytym and it flows smoothly. nothing at all is awkward.


  • smiley
    November 19, 2008

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    Hmmmmm

    without song? hmmmm, I wonder how I would have turned out if I didn't have a song within my soul... Pretty sad I guess. Strong write here. makes a person really think...

    Yvonne


  • Amera gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Wonderful! You took the picture and added another dimention to it. I really think this is fantastic in form, image and thought.
    "Minstrels drink ink without an inkling wrong"
    That is so original and clever.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Clovis6790Curious silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    Superb

    'tis a very fine write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • everyone1 gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Excellent!


    Truly ...

    I have a consideration for you?

    Given your openness of heart-well, you know I cannot write in this style, and could sure use the help?

    Wonderful expression of yourself, I love the fact that in all of you works you carry yourself without a difference, or, with an indifference.

    Peace to you brother man ... Bravo!!!!

    ~ James ~


  • Three Doves
    November 19, 2008

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    A wonderful weave of impeccable wording to get the message across. Works perfect alone even better with the pic. Another Excellent Write!
    Peace to you my brother and friend.
    Noah


  • poeticpieces
    November 19, 2008

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    Wow, Nice Weaving!

    Once again dad, you have me in awe! I enjoy the imagery, and I liked the pic prompt that you've chosen! Bravo! Thanks for penning another one to ponder on, what can I say, your poetry rocks!

    Love your son Timothy Jr. aka poeticpieces

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