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Dreams Are Real

I grab on but fall
the water so cold
How did I lose it all
why couldn't it hold?

The water fills me
pulling me down
Why doesn't anyone see
I'm about to drown?

My eyes pop open
sweat rolls down my back
I slowly count to ten
as it fades to black

Just another dream
but felt so real
Letting off some steam
because it's how I feel

I'm really drowning
but without all the water
Nobody sees how I'm frowning
because to them I'm smarter

I don't let them see
how really bad it is
Or how I long to be free
this life I'd not miss

The scars on my arm
I manage to cover quite well
So with a smile I disarm
and just say I fell

Because people are stupid
nobody really cares
They call me a kid
as they stopped and they stared

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