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My Safety Line

Can't seem to tell you
just how I feel
Do you feel it too
could it be real?

When I look in your eyes
everything floats away
In your eyes are no lies
just a reason to live another day

So if I should ask you
to be my safety line
Please say you do
please be mine

Because without you here
I find I'm empty
Cornered by the fear
you'll up and leave me

So I'll say it now
if you go I go
Don't really care how
as long as it's slow

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  • shibby shivs
    November 19, 2008
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    its good

    can totally relate to it.