you have to really live ; if in turn, you want to die
A contest entry
- 1/3 Round Contest by Hello...No.One.Home.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well theres an honesty there which didn't really click until I read it again
just one little thing though, you don't need a space before the ";". 
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Kate -
yeah
i like the way your so honest.
thats why in my eyes
living = over rate
as well as a shit load of things
infact.. just about everything. . -
sometimes i feel i died before ever living
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