Frustrated Mother

Years ago, while attempting to journal about the blessings and frustrations of my life at that time, I wrote a bunch of stuff in prose about the many things that were going right, but the when I started to consider the negatives,

the following came out in verse.

Unflushed toilets, unmade beds,

Unwashed dishes, no prayers said

A contest entry

Lines from Songs 25 PROMPT Contest by Paloszoo. 700 points, ended November 30, 2008, 12 entries
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Paloszoo
November 30, 2008

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I enjoyed this, but I have to admit I'm lost as to which prompt this was pertaining to. Nonetheless, it was a cool little piece. Thanks so much for taking the time to enter my contest. I’m honored to have you show your work here.
Ryan79
November 24, 2008

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Great poem. I like the rhymes. I can't wait to have kids. I'm sure that there are a lots of ups and downs, but in the end, it's all worth it, right?
Rhythm Child
November 19, 2008
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i think your poem related well to the title and it contained truth
so a good write