Woman was gifted to Adam
since angels whispered genesis
bewitching, spellbound
a phenomena destiny; spoke
silently with bedroom eyes.
Craving wanton lustful joy
incarceration impossible; bursting
erection ruled.... eager, willingly.
Passion: entwined two beings
apprehensive notions; denied!
Sweet shameless surrender
grew in courage; the fig leaf
removed time after time.
Procreation became erotic
unknown pleasure's bloomed.
Love's tender pink rose of
velvet moist petals; unfolded
gripping tight sultry sensations.
Squeezing; releasing her climax
he bellowed, moaned blazing glory.
Un-bashful his assertive tool
learning this orgasmic song
of his member, huge, bold.
Day and night once is never
enough; long ago discovered in Eden.
United, joined ravshing bodies
swirling a lullaby of lust
that started the world to sing.
Author notes
prompt: GIVE ME SEXUALITY
My imagery of the first encounter.....
In a list
A contest entry
- BAUDELAIRE by Godless But Divine.
1000 points, ended December 5, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations on the silver!
If there is just one word I could use to describe this poem, it's captivating. Everything about it is laced with exquisite imagery, language, spirituality, sensuality, and metaphor. Truly, this is one of the most beautifully written pieces in this genre I have ever read. I think I'll be bookmarking this one.
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Always a grapple....
how does the joy of sex mix with the apple.....
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Intriguing!
What a fascinating take on the prompt.
You took passionate love and romance
all the way back to the beginning.
I love the images you conjured with you
expressions of sensual delight.
I bet none of us could even come close
to revealing the true beauty and love
of Adam and Eve's rapturous union.
A marvelous write my friend
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nothing missing here,, no imagination required,, you write of lust very succinctly good luck dear friend
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Very Sensual and Lovely
kept its class to the end, portrayed its beauty of loves surrender, passion of love tied together so sweetly, This is Beautifully written Ennovy,
I loved this poem, Best of Luck in the contest.
Blessings to you,
Rend
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Passionate and scorchingly hot stuff!
Great read! Great write!
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