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Not Chosen

Finality has a certain ring,
And closed doors ended with a heavy thud.
Spring time sorrows bring little birds sing
You know-when they warble and call to the love.

Standing right beside me
is the feeling of uncertainty,
But I'm putting it in,
sending it off to be decided.

I can't believe I have to explain away
I just want to make these decisions.
I wish I could be understood,
Wish these could be my writings.

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  • flaquita
    May 1, 2009

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    Nice work enjoyed it, but left a taste of wanting a little more but then again that could be just me.
    Keep up the good work.
    ~ERIKA~