Polished to Perfection

Such chores each day,

polish, then play,

with words of even temper,

a duster here,

a keypad there ,

the flow is never ending.

Some tarnished edges start

to show,

these chores are so demanding~

Once gold,

now green,

with times own hue,

a silver bronze,

that once looked new,

brasso or duraglit it seems,

a heafty dose of elbow grease,

will bring these trophies back to life,

can also brings a glow to life.....

Author notes

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Celebration on 500 Trophies! by Harrisham Minhas. 1500 points, ended December 7, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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By me, right now

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darrylblacksr
December 22, 2008

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Nice trophy my friend, Which is so true with all events of life... Thanks for sharing this with me...
Happy Holidays and God Bless you and yours...
Desire
November 24, 2008

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Oh My~
Oooooh Love this and the words I could whistle too while smiling
Can't help but want to chuckle in a whimsical way
Woot!!
Beauty of a piece busy bee!!

Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
- cutiepie
  November 27, 2008
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  Thank you Glad you enjoyed it
Harrisham Minhas
November 22, 2008

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Aww...this is sweet.
An apt poem for this contest, which is a celebration on a collection of Gold, Silver, Bronze and Green trophies.
Well-crafted.

Thanks for your entry.

Harrisham Minhas
- cutiepie
  November 22, 2008
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  Thank you for the warm welcome Delighted that you enjoyed it
dustytiger
November 21, 2008

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this is really great, i like what you went with actually talking about real trophies for the contest, it is amazing what a little bit of work can accomplish, best of luck in the contest
- cutiepie
  November 22, 2008
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  Thank you for your kindness Delighted that you enjoyed it