Impulse is a fire
You can light dark;
At times burn fingers
Inadvertently,
Pause a while
Understand its nature;
Whether born of its own
As hunger and thirst do,
Release of teen age hormone
You want to indulge in
for instant pleasures.
Answering impulse
In a mature way;
Awaken awareness.
Author notes
impulse?
50 words or less
A contest entry
- impulse; everyone needs it by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 18 entries
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very very true
nice take on the prompt
and i think you did a very good job
thank you and good luck
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