Roisin
sun was of small moons
cluttering space and having impacts
Stacks of crystal cleans
rising depths of the wint' that broke
and there, ere unfold
a rose
so swept up in the swoops of sleet and cold feet
tread allies, all the snowmans would dance around it
this rose, broke wilt and bikered wild
bits of petals like layers of clothe
sundance
send in the snow
and sundown the rose
white is the backing
and the flower is
the rose
A contest entry
- WINTER ROSE by Rhythm Child.
550 points, ended December 2, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow...nice imagery. great write
good luck in the contest
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what a beautifully written piece, i love your take the prompt, it's just about the flower personified, wow, best of luck in the contest
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great entry
thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care
message me for anything
Billy (Rhythm Child)
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