There is a life that is waiting for you
a life you do not see
closer than you can imagine
a life that will set you free
look for a moment at the streets of gold
the magnificent kingdom of love
the ultimate paradise, the satisfying joy
found way up high above
don't question the bad you see all around
but rather focus on the good
a full understanding you'll never achieve
between where you stand and where you stood
it doesn't matter if it doesn't make sense
as long as the it's the word you know
it is the one and only truth
just trust me; believe and let go
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Celebration on 500 Trophies! by Harrisham Minhas.
1500 points, ended December 7, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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god i love that picture ! lol this has to be a good poem to take the attention of it
and it does
lol
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Thank you
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This is a positive poem.
These uplifting words tell that one should focus on achieving happiness and freedom and should not be distracted by negativity.
Well-expressed.
Thanks for your entry.
Harrisham Minhas
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Thank youu
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You're welcome.
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this is really fantastic, i have no idea what it means exactly, but it doesn't matter, i really loved it, best of luck in the contest
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Thank you
This poem is about a christian speaking to a non-believer about Jesus Christ and how wonderful your life can be if you accept him into your heart
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an absolutely beautiful picture, thats the eagle nebula ?
a great write
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Not sure lol probably
Thank youu ^-^
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