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source of energy----


Hidden virtues
swimming in streams of divine spirit
are making waves
to breath in  life,  to love and affection

Contentment is key to the successful
journey in life's stakes
and edging out ego
is the secret of life
and denying Envy at all times
is the source of energy

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The Secret of Life

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  • Purush
    November 26, 2008
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    thank you for the good words added to he serene idea


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    edging out ego
    is the secret of life
    if we want a life of joy
    shed light on the ego.
    it is simplicty
    there is no other secret
    Fantastic truth

    well done
    God bless you


  • Simply Olivia
    November 19, 2008
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    Contentment - yes!

    Thank you for sharing your thoughts