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Lost in Translation

In awkward pose
She eases his head to her breast.
In awkward pose
He struggles to remove her clothes
From his blushing face, most distressed.
Her blind love for him she confessed
In akward pose.

Author notes

"i am me i can only be myself"
"and even as time moves on"
"i will not change not for you"
"nore another"

Yesss. Not a lot I can say about this, other than the fact it was kinda' fun. x3 Took me forever to figure out WHERE to take my prompt, but yeah.

http://s304.photobucket.com/albums/nn193/darkhyper4/?action=view¤t=0405.jpg

The above link is the prompt, in case any of you were curious. ...even though I think it's still in my comment section. x3 Lulz; oh well.

Uhh'... yeah. x3 I hope this fits for what you were looking for. If not, I'm sorry. At least I tried, and that must count for something, right?

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  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    July 6, 2009
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    I didn't comment on this! -spams-

    This is so cute and pretty and adorable and zomg, reminds me of Neonnone and shizz. =( LIKE...kinda of The Dragon's Hearth? And yer'. I think you did an excellent job with this poem, seeing as your muse is so picky and stuff. And and and, I lurve you and and and...you didn't bad mouth this one either, so yey! <3


  • Dark Prince Chaos
    November 20, 2008

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    short ans sweet i loved it simpole and oddly intreeging i loved what you wrote you stuck to your pic perfect thank you for joining and best of luck to ya


  • Dark Prince Chaos
    November 20, 2008
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