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your angel

from you dreams i arise
my darling my love
open your eyes
for eternity is far away
and i your soulmate your gift
am here to stay
as i hid in your mind
my words did to
i wa in loves tight bind
true loves firts kiss
from dawn to dusk
has shown us just this
destiny has called our names
our bodies intwined
in loves burning flames
the echos, my love are loud and clear
and wait for you,
for you to hear.
with loves imense intensity,
are we ready now
'cause here comes eternity

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  • Zenda-Lokki silver member
    November 20, 2008

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    Beautiful

    I love the innocence and fragility expressed within this poem. Is beautiful. Thank you so much for your entry and good luck xx


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 19, 2008
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    this is a beautiful write
    Good luck in the contest