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spinning

twisting and twirling, painfully burning, round and round you go
flipping and running, never ending, what am i all about?

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George Gargano

A contest entry

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  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    November 26, 2008

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    I like this, it sort of reminded me of a buffy show I watched ages ago.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Kate


  • Sarah957
    November 22, 2008
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    i am kind of confused by the you and then the me. It would make a lot more sense to me if it was round and round "I" go and then "What am I all about".
    In the context of both parts being I, I can feel a connection to this. Sometimes I feel so topsy turvy I dont know WHATS solid any more.


  • Catie Sheeran
    November 19, 2008

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    great take on the prompt...this is good
    i like how you used flipping...i dunno why, lol. Good luck