All I can think about all day,
Is if I'll ever be ok.
I think about the stuff a teenager shouldn't think about,
All i can do is doubt,
If Ill ever be happy again,
If i will ever obtain,
Someone to love,
Someone who was sent from above.
That will love me for me,
Who will fill my life with glee.
Someone who will always be there,
Who won't get mad if I stare.
Someone who will stay,
And won't ever go away.
Someone who will make me smile, whenever i see her,
And who won't be a deciever,
Who will always be a part of my life,
And who will take away my strife.
Someone who will stay with me and won't break my heart,
Til' death do us apart.
A contest entry
- My other half by Angelo di Luce.
400 points, ended November 21, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Curse of Passion by Sokarjo.
1200 points, ended December 15, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Always remember that no one controls your thoughts except you. ;-) Good write! I think there's a lot of you in this piece probably; a lot of emotion and heart. Not quite what I am looking for, but don't let that discourage you. Keep writing! Keep polishing that talent. Thanks for entering! :-)
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I enjoyed reading you my friend
Yes if one could find all these in a mate would of found a true soul mate
Good luck in the contest.
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