Music is my life,
It's my metophorical knife.
It's loud screams and fast beats,
In the world music is elite.
I listen to alternative and screamo,
And yes i am quite emo.
Treat life as a toy forever,
Its fun to do whatever.
I hope you can relate,
But music is my only escape.
A contest entry
- Awake and Unafraid. by alexandra..
1000 points, ended November 30, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sound Of Music by Overcast.
600 points, ended November 26, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"It's loud screams and fast beats". Its not it's.
But I see what you mean by music being an only escape.
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I like this, lots.
Especially the second line, it's very powerful.
I think you're missing some form of punctuation in the the fourth line, it doesn't seem to flow as good as the others do.
The only bit I dislike is the
"yes I am quite emo"
It's not that there's anything wrong with it, I just despise it when people deliberately put themselves into boxes.
It's like saying I need a cliche to make me feel secure.
&that's something I have no sympathy for .
However, it's not something that will cloud my judgement.
BUT NOT HAVING THE QUOTE IN YOUR NOTES WILL.
I cannot give you any trophy unless you have that quote.
Goodluck,
x.
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ooooooo... i like it.
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