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Cry Aloud

Witness a murder and tear out a soul
There are somethings that just never get old
Try to relate be knocked to the ground
Wonder why there's never someone around
He brings down a fist and raises his voice
You cower below you have no other choice
Want to run but you know its no use
For he is bigger and stronger, and faster than you
Thrown your arms up in front of your face and scream for him to stop
But he will kill you one day no matter the cost
He tells you are worthless and you should just die
Calls you a slut and you can't help but think he's right
His voice rings in your ears and bruises begin to darken so fastand
you sit in the back rown of all your classes
And when you get home lock yourself in your room
Grab the razor and you know what to do
You slice and you cut and you slash your skin open up wide
Letting the pain within flow outside
Cleansing your soul of the things you've done bad
A sixteen year old girl praying to die, so sad
Then he bursts in and the door fly opens quickly
"You fucking bitch why don't you ever listen to me"
Doesnt notice blood running form her arms and her wrists
Nor the blood on her mouth from the blade she just kissed
Her only friend and her way out
I just start to cry as he screams and shouts

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  • FleetingImage
    November 19, 2008

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    ouch so much darkness so bluntly put but there are so many people in the world with this problem but i really hope this is fiction but if it is not i pray your life turns for the better...good luck.