Falling in love is painful enough but how will it hurt when I finally hit the ground?
Author notes
SouthernSuicide
A contest entry
- 1/3 Round Contest by Never.Give.Up.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think yall?
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Sometimes it does feel like that but you should never really worry about that or you mightn't really live life.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Kate -
These sound like the words of someone whose been hurt before. Good luck to you!
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You have posted a wonderful thought provoking sentence. I can tell you from experience hat it does hurt. A lot. But it's well worth the chance to experience the feeling.
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ooo...this is good. by the way...it hurts waaay too much...no words to describe it.
good luck
Love your take on the prompt
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