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Stage to Stage


One wore hoar age as well as most who count from tear to tear,
as stage succeeded stage geared down, while rage at age’s sting
increased as waning youth began to spread its restless wing,
while all too lucidly was heard furred dreaded footfall near.

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One bore sore rage as well as most who post from year to year, 
hale Summer paled, frail Autumn failed full promises to bring
to fruit as root from tree and shoot took little comfort. Ring
to ring adjoined seemed time purloined, no raison d’être clear.

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One saw Life’s page criss-cross sage stage barred from tomorrow’s cheer,
time underlined, once wined and dined, uncertain everything
became as game and aim turned tame, lost flavour, savour, zing,
lights on life’s stage in turn caged, rage, dim, swiftly disappear.

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The chronicle of wasted time, chased hasty jotted down
as witness to fear's tears, last years fast passed in study brown...

 

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  • ratkos
    November 24, 2008

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    i loved this work about the passage of time and our reactions to it. thank you for sharing this beautiful write with me


  • French Tries
    November 20, 2008

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    spellbound, encore et toujours

    There is something magic or magnetic in your poem "Stage to Stage" : I can't take my eyes off it, and it had the same effect as the first time I read it.

    I can't tell exactly why, but this is extraordinarly (or should I tell this is "ordinary", following your own "normality" lol )

    Jonathan, you can't possibly let people ignore the wonderful poet you are.

    Je n'ai pas dit que c'était la fierté qui devait te pousser à le faire, mais cela serait tellement dommage...

    Enfin, je ne t'envoie pas ce message pour te dire ce que tu as ou n'as pas à faire, but to tell you I am spellbound, encore et toujours.