Laying on a grassy hill
Under my maple tree
My long blonde hair blowing softly
In the warm summer night’s breeze.
What a beautiful sunset
Falling below the horizon
No clouds, no fog
I can feel something within.
Red and Orange
Yellow and Green
Blue and Indigo
So Intriguing.
It’s on the verge of night
And the ending of day
Reflecting back in my eyes
Will it forever stay?
The stars just waking up
To light the beautiful sky
To shine their very brightest
To hush every cry.
I close my eyes lightly
Drifting into a gentle sleep
Dreaming of the sunset
I wish to one day keep.
Author notes
Yeah, I wrote this in the actual spot I described it. The sunset was amazing that night. You really can find beauty in nature. Anyway, I hope you all enjoyed it.
Written February 3rd, 2004
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beautiful
I must say you have truely amazing talent hun. This was a beautiful write. Definately one of my favorites. The pictures in my head are colorful. I love the imagery. You have my appalause.
Lots of love, ~maryj~
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happy poem... whoa.. im not used to that... very well written
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This is so very colourful and your descriptive power is great.And I must say the last stanza gives a profound feel to this beautiful poem.I love it!
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hey this is wonderful, it makes me smile and brings a sweet sense of happiness as well. wonderful poem. i wish i had more possitive things to say. gook work. im also known as whitey4life screen name
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That's really amazing! You had wonderful detail there! Great job, there!
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10/10
Writing poetry at the spare of the moment can bring something really special to paper and this is one of those poems that do that. I get the feeling that I'm there in this poem, it reminds me of a warm summers evening
Great work, thanks for sharing.
Steve
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