If you like this poem never read it again,
don't tell anyone you read it,
don't tell anyone you care,
If you like this poem never comment on it,
don't dwell on it,
don't scrutinise it,
if you like this poem never applaude it,
don't praise it,
don't favour it,
i dont need your opinions... just go.... away
whatever
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No comment.
Lowell
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lol, you have to comment in the hope it frustrates lol
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I loved this! LOL And I AM gonna comment on it just to tell you that I'm sorry for commenting....
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nice...
and i am a bitch so nice write.
it spoke to me. you got good flow.
lol
great write
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Haha I laughed when I read this
I think its comical
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heh
Yer, i wrote it this morning when feeling rather frustrated - wanting to be left alone but still seeking praise
humans = ego maniacs!
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lol idk if this is supposed to be a joke. good job and im not sorry for commenting cuz u know you want it
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This is a cool approach! Its a great poem too! by the way, sorry for commenting! And applauding! Keep writing!
Lillie
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lol first off, thanks for your comment on my poem!
second off, im sorry im commenting...and praising!
but this is really cool, i thought it was really really creative, and i read over it twice just cos i enjoyed it a lot.
great write, very unique idea. thanks for sharing
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Well I really liked it (I'm commenting but I think it's good ). I liked the way it was set out and the way it read and the directness of the piece. The only suggestion I would make if anything is a breaking of the last line into two or three lines but that's just me I loved it the way it is as well. xxx
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