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Beach on golden sand



Sitting on a beach on golden sand
blue sky above me
glass of wine in my hand
with the sound of the waves
and palm trees blowing in the wind behind me
such a sight to see

ocean breeze to me is like music in the air
on a day like this it`s so easy to unwind
party time
i think it`s time to drink more wine

as the sun goes down it`s the place to be
folks walking hand in hand
splashing on the edge of the sea
then it`s off to a bar for some seafood company
in paradise it`s the place to be

sometimes i can sit and watch the waves
for hours changing places and shapes all day
a feeling so peaceful and free
doesn't really matter if you have company

along the coast the sun burns the sand
the smell of beer
lotion on people`s hands
look over there another party on the beach
help yourself man a beer is never outa reach..

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  • rbruce gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    I love the picture you have painted with this poem. Even though I have a dislike of beaches, I can see the peaceful scenery around you as I read. Well done, sir.


  • Whispers of Hope
    November 19, 2008

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    Wow this is nice your rythem so perfect and it flowed together well. I love the beach my favorite place to be I could picture it as I read !!


  • PoemOwen
    November 19, 2008
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    HOW YOU DOING kEN,JUST SAYING HELLO FROM THE uk,STEVE