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Thank You Brother





I feel like I play with you,
the moon,
that the stars are mine,
that the sea belongs to me,
that the sun is mine alone, and
that the sky is just for me.

I believe in your thoughts
which pinch but yielding fruit,
in the path even difficult to cross
but your inspirations amazed me,
inspired me to believe in my words,
in my sentences, in my tender hugs,
and to get the truth
Who am I,
therefore, despite defeats
no intentions of ceasing to be,
I follow your criticism,
not to irritate, but to learn
the mystical wonderful dreams
to continue in my poetic voyage
without an end.

Though not committed literally,
but I consider a brother like inspirations
getting from you,
and even in loosing,
I receive my drop of honey,
in the efforts to grow further.

Faced with my poetic life in this way intrepid
to step in so dangerous,
bloody biting thorns,
but so exciting to have,
a brotherly open heart
indispensable.

My favourite mentor

'PENMAN'

I want to thank you from
the inner cores of heart,
with desires to get
your inspirations..love..
forever.

Author notes

~spiritualangel~

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 30, 2008

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    He is a wonderful person here indeed. Always a kind word or a chucke from him. Beautiful tribute to an upstanding man.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm


  • penman gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Oh my, what a truly heart felt poem. You are so kind with your touching words. You grace AP with you wonderful. Thank you for all you do and this offering.


  • maralisa silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    aw wow a delightful poem hun your dedication to one of my favourite people I love your imagery and love in your poem your poem touchs the true quality of penman in many ways he is a inspiration to many and a valled member of our community good luck inthe contest take care thank you for sharing marailsa


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Well how come I knew who you were writing about even before I got to the name Because I know what an inspiration he is!
    This is an amazing dedication to a wonderful poet,mentor and friend. You have summed him up perfectly
    All the best with this
    gaylene