A massive collision of colored bubbles exploded the very moment my eyes met yours
Author notes
I hope i was able to express the feeling i was talking about... it was really hard to write just one line.. but the idea is amazing!! i love it
Oh and my name is Janie 
A contest entry
- 1/3 Round Contest by Never.Give.Up.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 44 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Is this like a fortune cookie..
do we put...."because I was hiiiigh" at the end of it...LOL -
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LOL yeah
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Aww... I can see the fireworks I love the colours to on the page and it ties in so beautifully
A wonderful line and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Kate
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Aww thats so cute! I like the sweet and cartoony idea of it. Like reality wasn't fit enough for that beautiful feeling so colored bubbles enter the scene to show the glory of the moment. Am I making any sense? Eh, probably not
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I love this!! For some strange reason it reminds me of when you see a spot of oil in a drive way and water gets on, all the wonderful colors appear....
Good luck, you expressed your feeling just fine.
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This is very soft and beautiful...you expressed yourself well in so few words...nice warm feeling of love...
best to you.
mystic
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way cool
it was perfect and hard i guess but it explains itself just perfectly. i wish i could of thought up something like that! -
Yours inspired mine! Thank you This is very vivid and the imagery is beautiful, I can totally see it happen. I've felt that way before
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oooo... i love the imagery in this.... what I pictured was gorgeous!
great take on the prompt and good luck
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Well done Janie! I love reading this
one liner of yours. Great imagery here.
Good luck to you!
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A collision and bubbles.
I mean when you READ collision you think an explosion of some kind or earthquake- lol.
Great combination, very grippy and personal!
G'luck in the contest Hun!
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