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Love, lost

Every passing moment,
I spent with you.

I loved you,
and you loved me.

Together...
We thought it would last forever.

Now,
You are gone...

You left me behind.

Mourning and grieving...

Unable to think of anyone,
but you.

You, and the precious time we spent
in each others arms. 

Author notes

3. Give me love. It can be about losing love of finding love i don't care it just has to be about you and that one other person...or people i don't know some people are weird that way.

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    December 29, 2008

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    awww this is great, a nice emotional write, that really draws on the readers feelings, i like it alot, take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    Oh how love can hurt! This is deeply heartfelt and sad.'s


  • Rhythm Child
    November 30, 2008

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    i think this poem is so relatable and undoubtedly sad but it was very well written and you can obviously express emotion brilliantly


  • Beauty Of Silence
    November 28, 2008

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    ooh. wow i really love this poem. it is simple, but very intense. and it really sad that you lost the one you love. this was very well expressed. emotions were raw. keep penning


  • chilali
    November 28, 2008

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    So sad! But very well written. I loved it Thank you for sharing.


  • Abstract Image
    November 19, 2008
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    aw such a sad poem to write and so quickly worded. was beautiful all the same...good luck.


  • Scyphon
    November 19, 2008

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    Beautiful poem, just as Ocean said, it can be taken either way. You wouldn't like to choose either sadly, but it touches more in the unknown truth of his leaving. Excellent write, best of luck to you ^_^


  • oceanbluize
    November 19, 2008

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    Hmmm..I can take this two ways...a bad break up, or anger lashed out because a lover died. Either way...this poem is special because you leave more than one option for the reader to ponder...very nicely done poetess!


    • PuppetCLOWN
      November 19, 2008
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      Aww...
      I am really glad that you enjoy my poems! You've commented on almost all of them and I thank you for that. ^^

      Much love,
      Tanya


  • MD Masroor
    November 19, 2008

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    Dark, deep, and strong in its meaning. This poem gives off an image that a lot of people go through, and you have used great imagery to capture that image. Keep it up!

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