My soul cries out to the heavens
My lament carries through the universe
Within I am painted
My heart is a wilted flower of sorrow
As my tears become a pool of blood
I look up to the world beyond
Trying to find answers
In the strive
To turn my nightmares into dreams!
A contest entry
- your black & white needs a little bit of red... by Immortal Obscurity.
1750 points, ended November 26, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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This is beautiful and sad, honest and touching... Your language is soft and flows of the tongue easily, ike a song. Well done, and thanks for entering
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Very emotive and concise... a dark write with an undertone of hope and strength... Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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